First+speech

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1. Volume - Voice is not too loud nor too slow. I can hear it just fine. =====

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 2. Pitch - Balanced pitch. You controlled the pitching nicely. =====

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 4. Emotion - The emotion kinda not very shown up. Maybe because the nerves had got you up. Well me too :P =====

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 5. Pronunciation - The pronunciation, there is still room for improvement. =====

RESPOND FROM HAJAR: Thank you for the comment. I appreciate it so much. I will try to improve it next time. Thank you again =)